Kaerimichi - Oneshot

[Pachka84]

Artsy and meh.

 

[Harusame]

@kiraidesu I think that this sort of story that ends with the two characters leaving things stay the same is quite realistic. As much as reading is an escape from reality, it does still need to be realistic. In that sense, I think being afraid or anxious to reveal one's true feelings is quite normal.

 

[mutopis]

pg 30, "I probably give you a call." -> "I probably will give you a call."

 

[onesnowyday]

@mutopis
thanks. fixed.

 

[throughstars]

Dang! It would be nice if this isn't oneshot

 

[RozuArison08]

That was fucking depressing

 

[Akai_Chi]

The Plot.

 

[Derasievers]

It's not sad ending. It's just hang up ending. I bet they will confess to each other by the time the blonde girl go to tokyo. When they distance will wider

 

[Suck-a-duck]

Aw cmon!

 

[KetiroTheDeadCat]

I am once-again depressed.

 

[Aldinew]

PAIN

 

[210astat]

Yeah, after re-reading... Nothing changed. Need second chapter! I knew they'll be happy together! Thank you.

 

[Azenith]

Whyyyyyy