Kaettekita Motoyuusha - Ch. 2.1

Once again, plss let us know of all our mistakes, point them out and send them to me, me and the team are trying to fix our mistakes and provide you with better quality every time, but just people coming here and saying things like there TL is shit and all that stuff is useless, as it won't increase the quality of our work, instead jus let us know our faults and I'll try to improve myself...
And thnx again for reading our work and supporting us
 
@YamiMao the translations were pretty good this chap. For the other chaps there were times where they didnt flow too well so certain things seemed out of place but this time it was alright
 
@thegoatrider thanks a lot, though i know that, even better can be done, but, we still need more pointers so that we could improve at a faster pace,
and i thank you for the appreciating our work
 
@YamiMao
Page nine, him thinking she is older than she looks from what she said, I assume she said something in an old style manner of speech or something? Like the Japanese equivalent of using "thee olde englishe". It's one of this subtle detail things.
 
The loli says she is a demon, and probably plans to cause chaos, but with looks like that, it's pretty much unavoidable she'll get into MC's harem.
 
Very effective training. Can grope all he wants in the name of "motivating" her. I fully approve.
 

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