Kage no Eiyuu no Nichijou-tan - Ch. 1

There is an ongoing webnovel for this:
https://ncode.syosetu.com/n2133fo/

Kadokawa's releasing LN Vol 2 this Aug 5th.
https://www.kadokawa.co.jp/product/322004000758/
 
meh, so far this is a hard 5 big old average with bad writing and story that just jumps everywhere is exposition dumps that would have been better if the main character was thinking back on what happened to him as he was going to kill the demon lord
 
No no they're not on the level of humongous. They're average. Just the right curves--
Wait.
Oh, he was talking about the building?
 
I would like to bring your attention to the fucked up way he is holding his rifle
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If the demon lord(and hero) reappears every ten years or so, why dissolve the organisation? Wouldn't having it on standby be better?

I can't help but feel there's something strange with the whole system though, like someone was orchestrating it...
 
Alrigggght, lets see where this goes.
How many nobles are going to underestimate the new guy and challenge him to duels.
Also Tsundere heroine challenge to duel in the first few chapters so she can go full dere dere.
Also glasses nee-chan gonna be a teacher right?
 
I prefer this one rather the other series. You know, the other "Kage", the one that he think that "Normal Life" is just sex, eat, and sleep.
But hopefully it's gonna be good.
 
It's so cringy whenever exposition dumps are done when someone explains the plot and setting of the story to a character that already knows everything being said.

Why not just make it be introduced to the audience through a flashback or explaining it to a character that wouldn't know all this already
 
@Chizan While the hero and demon lord might appear every 10 or so years, this kingdom made the organization to make sure that the hero that came from their kingdom didn't lose, which he almost did. They don't seem to care about whether the hero of another country loses because it won't effect their reputation. They did everything to make sure they kept a good reputation, and helping other countries in secret will not help their rep, and it seems like the hero appears in a different country each time so for at least the next 2 or 3 wars, their rep is gonna be easy to keep.
 
To be honest, the only actually good page in the entire chapter was the last one, and barely so. The entire chapter is poorly done exposition (info dump at its finest) and a few completely predictable boring moments. sigh
 

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