Kage no Jitsuryokusha ni Naritakute - Vol. 5 Ch. 17 - Version 2

[Vandrer]

This is much better, thank you

 

[Speak_Evil]

April was months ago.

 

[Yohantus]

Yeah, this is definitely better I spotted too many mistakes in the last one, glad that they revised it

 

[Luke_chase]

Nice update, I guess I read enough shit translations to have not noticed how bad v1 was, but this is definitely better

 

[Dragotth]

It's nice that there's a v2, there were some small mistakes in v1 that might have given off misleading information. Nice job!

 

[FrozenPot]

The first version confused me I didn’t know wether it was bad writing from the author or bad a translation since it was good at some parts and retarded in other parts. I’m glad you redid it you should proofread better tho next time

 

[KawaiiMajinken]

meme slang in translations is kinda ass but at least is better than what we alredy had.

Thanks~

 

[Cinnamonalt]

I didn't enjoy "that" way of speech in the first pages. But the overall flow of the conversations got massively better. Especially the part with Shadow Garden and the baldy. So thanks.

 

[introvertchild]

Thank god you guys fixed it, the meaning was completely lost and I understood basically nothing from version 1

 

[critico]

Dejavu

 

[Saxfire]

Im so glad, thanks!

 

[Rathendar]

Much clearer to read. Add my thanks to the new version team. Also to the original. I simply enjoy this series that much.

 

[Scrwd]

Delta is a good girl, dont be too hard on her

 

[jean-chuck]

MY EYEEEESSSS!!!!!

 

[Zanderkoala]

I'm glad I re-read this version. Much improved. Thanks for the translation~

 

[Darkmeep]

Thank

 

[Lightbrand]

Finally I can understand somewhat what Alpha is saying in all her exposition dialogues.

 

[FrostKD]

Thanks for the updates!!!

 

[Fari]

first few pages are... very awkward. But the back half shedded some extra light.

 

[Galouz]

Delta is qt