p3 Looks nice.
p7 top panel made me laugh
p13-14 Made me swoon.
And everyone wondering why this sucks. I think it's because the author does good things and then ruins everything he built up over a few pages in one panel. He is consistently inconsistent. About as reliable as our fuck-up protagonist Kazuya.
Like, I think p18-20 is supposed to be Kazyua feeling better/relaxed after she stayed there and falling asleep happy, but I completely missed it the first time because the delivery just made me think it was Kazuya being stupid, "man does Kazuya look stupid on p20.", and "is this supposed to be funny?"