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Kanojo wa Itsumo Kagayaiteita - Oneshot

Oh, come on, that's cheap. No, I don't mean to say that irl illness and death are cheap, but they are certainly the cheapest, laziest tools in the tearjerker arsenal. I kinda anticipated it from the drama+tragedy tag combo, along with the description, but man...

Is that all there is to good writing? Throw in some (soon to be) dead girls, and you're in for the award?
God I'm disappointed.
 
@Inori Well, it's called rookie winner for a reason, and also he/she win the bronze award not gold. anyway, probably it's because there's no other submission that as 'good' as this?
 
i mean.. sad, yeah... but that disease tho.. i couldn't make a straight face at all. 😂
 
The dumb disease was whatever

I didn't like he was apathetic to what's going on or focus on her being pretty no real emotional impact.

Arts nice tho
 

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