Kemoraifu - Ch. 8 - 71-80(Twitter)

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About warbler white eye vs bush warbler:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Warbling_white-eye
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Japanese_bush_warbler
The bush warbler goes hokekyo while the white eye just... tweets? I really have no idea how to translate chirps into english.
 
Not sure how this has gone unnoticed for so long, but "Where did it went off to?" is grammatically incorrect. "Where did it go off to?", "Where has it gone off to?", and "Where has it went?" are all viable alternatives.
 
I'm feeling sorry for the "missing dog" girl, she's quite miserable. And her dog is a bully.
 
@Isopotonic
I've noticed, I just assumed people were already mentioning it. Also worth pointing out, it should be "makes the target go aww" on page 5.

And "Where has it went" might be considered acceptable usage, but it still sounds pretty awkward IMO. I would definitely go with one of your other two examples.
 
@Isopotonic @IHavoc Thanks for the correction. I guess I really need a proofreader... Now I have to redo all those previous pages. Maybe I'll do that when there's one.
 

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