Kimi ga Shinu Made Ato 100 Nichi - Ch. 28 - I'll Forgive You

Honestly I think that Umi will either commit suicide due to some internal pressure that she is putting on herself and not expressing or she will kill someone. I think Umi is silently a crazy person.
 
@Tanazanite Two suggestions:

恋人じゃなくてもただの幼なじみでもいいから。

The way the current translation is worded makes it seem like he's neither her boyfriend nor her osananajimi/childhood friend.

[ul]
[li]Even if I'm not her boyfriend,/ even if I'm just a childhood friend. (parallel structure and repetition to get his desperation across) or[/li]
[li]I don't care if I'm not her boyfriend.../ ...and just a childhood friend. or[/li]
[li]Even if I'm not her boyfriend.../...and just a childhood friend.[/li]
[/ul]

I'm doting on you too less, rather.

I'd say/think/etc I'm doting on you way too little. (Mirrors Umi's line about being doted on too much.)
 
@justforthelulz - Just because the same flag was raised in two chapters back to back? Any he further vows to do anything, no matter what?

I'm sure that's fine.
 
You are my sunshine, my only sunshine
You make me happy when skies are grey
You'll never know dear how much I love you
Please don't take my sunshine away

You could have just put a chapter of crying puppies in here and it would have carried the same message across, really.
 

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