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Cheo31 Joined Apr 19, 2018 Messages 15 May 20, 2018 #2 the story seems interesting let's hope it has a good development
AirCanister Joined Dec 7, 2019 Messages 275 Oct 27, 2020 #3 Yo. I've slept on this series. So glad I picked it up.
Princethedankest Joined Dec 11, 2019 Messages 428 Nov 11, 2020 #4 It would be funny if MC was just hallucinating.
Hacete Joined Apr 24, 2020 Messages 3,169 Nov 18, 2020 #6 I will go with A-San and B-San. And I will address A-San as the present one and B-San as the future ghost. B-San became a ghost that forgot its memories and can have a dream?! Not much about A-San was revealed here.
I will go with A-San and B-San. And I will address A-San as the present one and B-San as the future ghost. B-San became a ghost that forgot its memories and can have a dream?! Not much about A-San was revealed here.
Radicool21 Joined Jan 18, 2018 Messages 1,708 Dec 21, 2020 #8 Strong first chapter, solid MC. I like that the story doesn’t treat the reader like an idiot; everything progresses naturally and the exposition isn’t gratuitous. Looking forward to reading more.
Strong first chapter, solid MC. I like that the story doesn’t treat the reader like an idiot; everything progresses naturally and the exposition isn’t gratuitous. Looking forward to reading more.
bejad007 Joined Jan 14, 2019 Messages 1,494 Jan 12, 2021 #9 cheerful isn't the proper stand point to say someone didn't commit suicide tho