Kimi wa Midara na Boku no Joou - Vol. 2 Ch. 9

All aspiring writers take note: that is how you escalate a scene, build tension by degrees, then suddenly release it. Even if the reader knows what's inevitably coming, they still get it all over their face.

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Even worse, imagine being the little sister, and having to run out of the room with your sister's boyfriend's 'genetic material' all over your face to find somewhere to wipe it off.
 
Well that was one hell of a welcome gift the sister got from brother in law :)
 

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