The chapter was a good read except for one part. On page 12 panel one, the line of "Chauvinistic Mysoginist" needs to be changed to "Chauvinistic Pig" or "Male Chauvinistic Pig" . That is how the insult is done in English and should be written that way. You'll hear this more out people.
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