Is it just me or does the editing feel *really* weak this time around? The letter to Kanna is near impossible to read at a glance, and spelling mistakes... It almost feels like this was a draft of the properly edited release.
I need you now like I always needed you, to fight as a comrade.
And now we need to have the dragon ball near battlefield too.
We can no longer wait for you to produce them over there.
So I want you to come over here.
@kaminomikan I think it's more because she didn't run into Kobayashi first. She left the letter when no one else was home which made it easier and then ran into Saikawa.
Page 4:
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[*]"hitthe" --> "hit the"
[*]"figth" --> "fight"
[*]"But I really want do something after all" --> "But I really want to do something after all"[/ul]
Page 6: "I need... hold on to Kobayashi-san, don't I...?" missing to between "need" and "hold".
Page 9: "Kobayashi is sticking her head on the fight" --> "Kobayashi is sticking her head in the fight"
Page 11: "strenght" --> "strength"
Page 14: "we need to have the dragon ball near battle field" --> "we need to have the dragon ball near the battlefield"
I'm not a fan of when manga add a big overarching story 50+ chapters in, especially to SoL or largely "story-less" manga, usually doesn't end well and feels super unnatural. Fingers crossed.
@Yautja Fingers crossed indeed. Particularly since Cool seems to do this a lot, with some kind of serious or even world-breaking plot lurking somewhere underneath or around the edges . . . and IMO when it finally surfaces it's the least good and least well handled part. That said, in this one it seems a bit better integrated than usual.