Koisuru Asteroid - Vol. 3 Ch. 35 - Shining Star Challenge 1

[MangaDex]

 

[ascendedLight]

Fuller review later. So just some translation issues for @PredatorDuck:

• Page 5, last bubble: Since you used "grittier" last chapter, I think you should go on using it here--Mira definitively refers to it.
• Page 7, left strip, panel 3: Tomori says she's from "Main Island"--not wrong per se, but it'd be clearer to the readers that she is referring to Okinawa Island.
• Page 10, right strip, panel 1: You may as well translate "local language" as "Okinawan."

Selected Chinese scanalation comment: If Ao didn't come, it looks like Mira would have started her harem..

 

[KZO]

So Ao wasn't selected mainly because she couldn't fit everything she wanted to write in her writeup. She could have asked some tips to Mira about how to summarize it better after Mira was done with hers.

Tomorin is so good, I hope she becomes part of the main cast later.

 

[enigmator]

This new arc is looking promising. Glad to see Ao and Mira actually taking clear, definable steps towards their overarching goal.

 

[MoonlightwolfchanX]

I like the new characters here and those nice color pages.

Getting closer and closer to their goal, go Mira and Ao!