Kokenoshima

[MangaDex]

 

[Akaeie]

Something about it isn't right, just doesn't flow well. Could have been amazing

 

[DracoSafarius]

@Akaeie I know what you mean, story isn't bad but there's just weird decisions in where the panels go and it really doesn't show stuff concisely

 

[j48dmxk39]

it is so hard to tell wtf is happening, there's so much detail yet it feels so disorganized