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E exeswiss Joined Sep 23, 2018 Messages 57 Dec 22, 2019 #2 in this chapter the dragon looks ALOT like Deathwing
T tuatara1 Joined Aug 10, 2018 Messages 821 Dec 22, 2019 #5 That was quite sweet. It moves a bit fast to have as much emotional impact as I think is intended, but it's still effective.
That was quite sweet. It moves a bit fast to have as much emotional impact as I think is intended, but it's still effective.
Moodyz Joined Jan 21, 2018 Messages 1,518 Dec 22, 2019 #6 Moments like this we need Grandma Torogai from Seirei no Moribito shouting "TAMAGO!!"
phil777 Joined May 12, 2018 Messages 3,728 Dec 22, 2019 #7 @exeswiss Looks more rock-like than Deathwing did though.
D DragonkingKyo Joined Mar 17, 2019 Messages 37 Dec 22, 2019 #10 well that felt forced(empty) and came out of nowhere(as another said badly executed)
PrivatePublic Joined Sep 25, 2018 Messages 523 Dec 22, 2019 #11 If this development had in any way been, you know, developed...I'd like it. As it stands, it is just a cheap "Hug the dog" moment.
If this development had in any way been, you know, developed...I'd like it. As it stands, it is just a cheap "Hug the dog" moment.
C captain_crunch Joined Sep 10, 2018 Messages 1,653 Dec 22, 2019 #12 What if they cook and eat the egg? Depressed suicidal dragon
nachtness Joined Nov 16, 2018 Messages 3,202 Dec 22, 2019 #15 then it'll feel more despair after elf mom dead fucking good job
Fenrire Joined Apr 1, 2019 Messages 376 Dec 22, 2019 #16 Too rushed sadly, not too bad but far too rushed
G greyhud90 Joined Feb 21, 2018 Messages 1,041 Dec 22, 2019 #17 that was too random Is this family guy lol
lionfromnorth Joined Sep 25, 2018 Messages 1,540 Dec 22, 2019 #19 Contrary to what everyone is saying in this comment section, I liked this chapter.
Drifter Joined Jan 22, 2018 Messages 2,062 Dec 22, 2019 #20 It could have had more impact the author taken a chapter or two to let us understand the dragon better. We went from "please kill me" to warm and fuzzy too fast. Still a pleasant read.
It could have had more impact the author taken a chapter or two to let us understand the dragon better. We went from "please kill me" to warm and fuzzy too fast. Still a pleasant read.