Catgirl on page 12 must be redrawn. First I thought there is something wrong with her waistline, but then it hit me: Everything below her cloak (legs, waistline) has been drawn right (good enough), but it doesn't fit with the upperpart of the drawing (head position, shoulders). It's like two drawings have been combined. The shoulders and head are just a bit too small and the perspective seems to be off a bit.