Like the Kudan - Vol. 5 Ch. 41 - Hikaru Tsujimoto < Part 17 > Chizuru Sakurai < Part 10 >

Wait. So the cow is her dad? But the dad died because of something that past Hikaru did? Nothing makes sense!
 
And here, you can clearly see the author is under pressure from low ratings and the editorial team because the pacing is completely lost and he's trying to cram in more twists/events to try to keep reader interest.
 
......man. This had such an interesting premise. I guess it's not too late for everything to work out, but holy crap it feels like things have gone off the rail.
 

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