Lock Up Prince

That was actually really cute. A bit busy for a oneshot, so the pacing is a little questionable when you step back and scrutinize it, but it flowed quite nicely. I enjoyed it!
 
i wasnt expecting to like it at all since... well the character is so Ditzy™ and the mangaka really hit the nail on the head with those otome characters that have people falling all over them for being assholes or by just... breathing..., but it was cute in the end despite being really weird. rip that guy who was trapped in a game until wau filled his love bar. i really wonder how long he was stuck in there for djflkas
 
This a bit cringe, and a bit cute. I mean I read it all, but like... poor dudes who get stuck there. I like the premise, even the overall story plot, but the world building is meh... I get it, its a oneshot, so I'm not expecting some super well thought out story, but how does this VR game even work???
 

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