There were some grammatical errors but the amount of those errors are small compared to other people who picked up a translation. Please keep translating this you are already doing an amazing job!
The English wasn't that bad honestly. There has been far worse on this site. Not a bad job overall. Can't judge the translation quality without comparing the original, though.
Also, sensei is the best. Until Zepar decides to get some action.
ok, guess, I'd try to keep translating it.
There's someone already willing to help me at proofreading. Thanks (and maybe even typesetting, making this way easier for me)
@Zhou well, you can always judge for yourself the level of the translation with the original jpn raw, I'm not perfect so I don't know.
to the rest, whom the "note" caught your attention, I don't remember where I found the pic lol sorry (could be either pixiv or ex lol)