was a good translation but im pretty sure it should be fenris not fenlys since if i recall fenris is a mythical creature of some sort in norse mythology (not fenrir, i mean a different creature)
Translation was fine. I didn't notice any glaring problems with the translation flow. An alternate name for Fenrir was "Fenrir's Wolf" which often was shortened to "Fenris". But the lineage doesn't match. Fenrir was supposedly fathered by Loki and destined to kill Odin, but here she claims to be the younger sister of Fengaril which has no corresponding name in Norse Mythology.
Well, sadly the tags don't say gender bender so him turning into a girl and staying like that forever is not gonna happen. He may have turned into a girl for a bit but it was for info gathering for the transformation magic so of course he would click here and there to see what happens...Really cute and full of PLOT his girl form tho.