Machigatta Ko wo Mahou Shoujo ni Shiteshimatta - Vol. 1 Ch. 10

[FlashGordan]

@wolvenworks Thanks, I know there's always going to be some disconnect translating things to be intelligible to different audiences I'm not too beat up about it I just want to make sure people are clear on what they're getting . Will probably be the last time I bother bringing it up (although I WAS slacking a bit on accuracy and just doing broad strokes translation during the wordier sections)

 

[Wolvenworks]

@FlashGordan with that said, it's still more efficient to TL directly from the source to minimize "casualty"

 

[daywithoutgames]

in the cover page , the kanji-s are : Giant B00bs Appear .

page 5 : a lot of panties-shot , so $exy , lol . well , this is a dark comedy manga , so dont think too much about the dark parts .

page 10 , how the female pikachu convinces the MC : if you go there , you can satisfied your blood-lust , and bath yourself with the blood of the monster .

i swear , all these school president girls look exactly the same , the girl below is from Danberu nan kiro moteru , another great manga about cute girls doing cute things :

 

[princeofcups]

In reality it seems that you are pretty much writing this from scratch with some clues from the original. Seriously, that's how comics are written in the US. Plot --> Art --> Dialogue. So you should submit this over at DC and Marvel. Someone may have a job for you. :-)

All in all, good work!

 

[DrMKUltra]

No THAT is a magical girl right there!