Magan to Dangan o Tsukatte Isekai o Buchinuku! - Vol. 1 Ch. 8

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@Jupitus look dude, I'm just giving criticism, it's not like I have to enjoy every single thing, there's always going to be something that a story could've done better, even my favorite manga have it's very own criticism. And don't take a criticism as hate, because I actually give my opinion on how to improve it (like stating how he could remove the slave mark).