@Rak25 (did you change your username?)
page1: 'Kiichiro' is misspelled (Kiichioro)
page2: 'Kiichiro' is misspelled (Kiichior)
page5: 'Kiichiro' is misspelled (Kiichior)
Page 2 "I am having a hard time for me to move right now". You can reduce this to 'I am having a hard time moving right now'
Page 8 "Everyones' has" Can just be 'everyone has' @Rak25 Thank you for your hard work @Wickedhero
Seems like she wanted to try and change his clothes, but then used the temperature check as cover