Maid no Kishi-san - Vol. 1 Ch. 4 - Cold

@Rak25 (did you change your username?)
page1: 'Kiichiro' is misspelled (Kiichioro)
page2: 'Kiichiro' is misspelled (Kiichior)
page5: 'Kiichiro' is misspelled (Kiichior)
 
Page 2 "I am having a hard time for me to move right now". You can reduce this to 'I am having a hard time moving right now'
Page 8 "Everyones' has" Can just be 'everyone has'
@Rak25 Thank you for your hard work
@Wickedhero
Seems like she wanted to try and change his clothes, but then used the temperature check as cover
 
Why do i feel that our protag is not clumsy. but cursed in exchange for his fortune.
 

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