Mainichi Shine Shine Itte Kuru Gimai ga, Ore ga Nete Iru Suki ni Saimin-jutsu de Hore Saseyou to Shite Kurundakedo…! - Ch. 3 - A Novel and Hypnosis

[WizPlayzGamez]

HIS MOM KNOWS HE WROTE WHAT???? NAHHHHHHHHH, HELLL NAHHHHHHHHH

 

[tabris51]

nice

 

[sanctuary]

Based.

 

[Soumyakoner1997]

i laughed sooo hard here ohh god my stomach is hurting

 

[Harmless_Potato]

its so stupid
i love stupid

 

[Zergio200ism]

i think the author could have invented a better excuse for him to follow her orders, the " she is gonna kill if dont obey her " is stupid :

 

[raidensnakeezio]

unreliable mc-narrator lmao. he says he's a nameless author but he can't be a nameless author if there is that much merch (plushies? drama cds? other voice actors got paid decently to read this out because there's a significant amount of people wanting this content?)

edit: ps: also calling it right now, sasamoto yuzuxxx, the #1 ln author is likely gonna be rinko-chan, the light haired girl.

 

[Asarion22]

@Zergio200ism agree, but ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

 

[Podi125]

Ngl this is funny in the dumbest way possible.

 

[retsura]

i like the concept but it kinda forced...

if the sister not that dumbass and the brother is better at acting... then it should be more... em... lewd

 

[Ufi]

I hate it when they self insert themselves into the story

 

[CookieLoop]

Well... I was gonna try and see how long I could watch this trainwreck, but there's already guts everywhere, there's a bloody pacifier hanging off my shoulder, now sure what's going on with that pile of gore with 2 heads...
I'ma head out...

 

[rxfan]

She said eat up, ayoooooooooooo

 

[UnknownSaint111]

If this is going to be repetitive with no progress I’m gonna be pissed off!

 

[Darkmeep]

This is just another eromanga clone.

 

[SeekingSolace]

he’s right, having to read aloud what you wrote is just plain cruel

 

[derpman568]

this shit is making me want to read domestic girlfriend

 

[kaitouk166]

she's fucking horny wtf

 

[K1NGS3DDYx89]

He did it to her she wants smashy smashy

 

[chusetto]

And now he's a webnovel author... This shit is shitty, but I just keep reading xD