Oh shit, well this totally explains the anime's ED, huh? Cool. Before this chapter, the four of them had absolutely nothing to do with one another, so I thought the ED was pretty strange.
@sondz1911 here are a few i spotted
page 2 -"I have called him here all of the sudden'' - seems strange given the first half of the sentence, i dont know the raw so i cant comment on the correction
''this reading session'' -> should be ''a reading session''
page 9 - '' I always sensed something was near'' -> maybe should be ''someone''?
page 12 - ''sensei'' -> typo? or was it actually sensei?
page 13 - ''no need to be active'' -> i cant be sure but maybe ''no need to be proactive/on the offensive''
''if the boys smiled at me'' ->''if boys smile at me'' unless she is specifically mentioning the class
many of these might not be grammar but more just how it sounded when read, just felt that bit off
Amelie's the only real option right? She's had so much more development as a love interest at this point. Unless Alice suddenly becomes a serious candidate, I don't see Amelie losing.
@HYBRID_BEING The only reason people remember Eiko is because for some reason the anime keeps trying to push her. Which is weird for a complete non-character.
I love everything about this chapter. Four girls who are implied to have feelings for the same guy in which one is in love, one is blunt as fuck, one just wants his dick and one's too socially oblivious to know if she likes him or not is hilarious.
Also Clara saying "Crimson-Chin" is hilarious just because I keep thinking of the Fairy Oddparents