Makai Kaeri no Rettou Nouryokusha - Ch. 0

Hmm... kinda reeks of LN-ness.
At least the title isn't 600 words long.
 
I too noticed the missing nameplate 😬
Even triple checked when I was first reading through....

Anyway thanks for the release. Got at least another 3-8 (maybe a bit more if they are shorter chapters.)
 
I would say he should be happy to even have a house. But I'm pretty sure the rats are smaller on the street than they are in that 'house'.
 
That's a massive price to pay...
I wonder what happened to his mother...
If he gets forgotten, does that mean that he was tossed into the other side while his mother did a kamikaze into the evil god?
 
" a failure like me... "

*Proceed to float to the massive blackhole in the sky....

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Huh, a chinese sage... "cultivation" it says... He's going to turn to a complete edge lord later on, isnt he?
 
That black hole looks like date a live space quake. But instead of cute girl spawning it's just ugly monster.
 
IT'S TIME FOR A REVIEW LADS AND LADDIES YOU KNOW WHAT THAT MEANS.

So firstly: Well lengthed chapters, if not a tad confusing as there isn't really much explanation as to why things are... cough cough *DEMONS.* Generally, however, I enjoyed the chapter due to its light-weightedness. Of course, this is in reference to nothing dangerous or traumatizing as that FACE (Solo Leveling Reference.) Which I believe puts in a nice feel for the protag.

Secondly, there are quite a few errors or well more accurately "Why is it like that, but not like that here?" moments, dunno if the OA is reading this but 10/10 should get that fixed when the next chapter comes in (Sorry can't point them out since this is one of my LIGHT reviews.)

Thirdly, I don't know if it's intentional for Chapter 0 to be slightly confusing but it really is, guess we'll learn more in Chapter 1.

Bye, and goodnight.
 

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