Makikomarete Isekai Teni suru Yatsu wa, Taitei Cheat - Vol. 6 Ch. 28

I think that it looks really good to be honest, top 2 you can barely tell the difference, the books a little since there is a lot of drawing there, baby maker again can barely tell. Really good job.
 
The fuck you saying bruh, suck at redrawing?! there is no difference between the raw and the redraw... take your fake modesty the hell outta here!
 
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@vhr2121 @Bloddrake
your eyes are not keen enough to see huh
-shadow of calbis hair is no good
-books were not align
-shadow in the ground is weird
-the dark area at kyousai is just a guess, and if you zoom it it's actually a mess
-the tattoo of calbis has been erased
-her left wing is i think has become wierd, not proportion in her right wing
etc. etc

I spent a whole day just to redraw man, so don't say harsh words
 
Sitting in a small ass bathtub with 4 other girls is absolute heaven? It's just people accidentally punching and kicking each other with every move. I wouldn't even want to do that as a guy.
 
"Takanashi Kyousai... his magic destructible, he's intelligent, he was even able to read the forbidden books"
well 2 of those things are true but i can promise you evil demon lady he sure as shit is not intelligent, he has proven that many times already.
 
Maybe I just don’t have the eye for it, but your redrawing looked just fine to me and I wouldn’t have even known English wasn’t your first language if you hadn’t said anything.

I think it’d be okay for you to have a little more confidence in yourself.
 
The quality of translation has certainly improved, though I don't know what she meant by "his magic is destructible".

On another note, that's a scary looking demon reproductive system.
 
@dereth Maybe it's "incredibly destructive" but smashed together in that way that Japan does with its moonrunes.
 
maybe im a fast reader but i didnt even notice that redraw until you pointed it out, also not the first time i see someone say they bad at redrawn and im like"what i didnt see anyting weird"...

maybe i should spend 5mins per page examining every pixel trying to find some flaws...
 
Sup bro! First of all, there's no need to apologize to us plebs., thanks a lot for spending your time to update this LH-forgotten one
 
@doomer that's why first impressions are important, you can get away with a lot more until they notice your flaws.
 

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