Works as proof of the author's skills in setting atmosphere. As a story, not so much. I mean there's only so much to expect from these Twitter-style 4-pagers.
Not much to chew on from the little it revealed.
I like the art. She's definitely cute. Seems like a sweet calm heroine. The guy may not seem confidence enough...
If he was more candid and confident I think I'd be more interested but who knows. 'Doubt this will become serialized with how generic it is of a oneshot introduction. 5/10. It's alright.