It certainly have potential. But it lacks the background story. Hope the author to explain it early because the reader still didn't aware of what this story provides for. If not of that, the antusiasm could tense down fast
@Herrgast do you aware that an author have a lot of mind to make it a manga? If not, you should read hitman to have a better critic than this. This is not that bad but still have space to be better though