Money, Romance and Me - Oneshot

The reliance on self-sabotage would get old really fast. Otherwise, this is really entertaining for a one-shot.
 
"If this was a manga, I would be a bystander"

NOP! With this look and hair cut, you can ONLY be the MC or one the main characters (main enemy, main best friend, school president...etc) AND the "I'm poor" situation is a +1000% bonus for a MC chair...
 
"....he read?"
"serialize it...."
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Reached page 5 and needed to stop and comment:
Having pure gold ingots on her head doesn't tell me how rich she is. It is just tells me how beastly strong she is. She has about 55 pounds on her head.
 
Eh. Fine as a one shot, but if this was stretched into a series then the gimmick would get old pretty fast. Maybe it's just not my thing.
 
Chance of a series, but i want it to be atleast 30-40 chapters. Making it longer will make it boring unless each chapter is entertaining.
 

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