The chapter before this was so exciting but then this chapter straight up kills all the excitement by being a recap/info dump. I'd rather it skip straight to her next attack/encounter with them with maybe a little info as it plays out.
When you explain the horror, it all goes downhill. Instead of stating this story as fact, they should have said it as if it were similar to keep the doubtful atmosphere it had.
This chapter appeared on the storywriter's website...and he might be doing some extra work on the story...https://twitter.com/yollandamaakeo/status/1082972954978369536.
Not sure if he means rewrite by changing the dialogue, or helping to translate what is there already.