looks like people here don't know why sniping is looked down.
yes, competition is usually good thing but there's no rewards in this case (except for nonexistent ads and patreon donations).
the "winner" doesn't have any obligation to continue their work so they can quit literally 1 or 2 chapter after the other decided to quit which potentially throw a series to eternal limbo. there's also almost no benefit to have 2 translator if the previous translator is already decent.
if you continue doing this for, let's say, 3 months i doubt anyone would complain about sniping (bears is also sniping in the first place, i don't know why no one complained in their early releases though)
that's said the translation itself is pretty good. i think bear's make more sense for the last 2 pages but other than that i can't see any difference (i am not the one to judge though).
for the typeset, it's not really bad but there's a guide for typesetting here (can't give you the link right now but just typing "typeset" on the search bar would do) hope it can help you to improve the typeset :)