My Charging Girlfriend - Ch. 0 - Teaser

I think Toxin should be changed to drug... I'll do it later
 
I think the typesetting is very good, but the translation is not very smooth. It isn't terrible but the meaning of sentences isn't very clear- maybe the original is also vague.
 
It's just a teaser it's not supposed to make sense yet...
 

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