My Heart is Beating

I remember reading this a long time ago, it was ok. Thank you for uploading it.
 
One of my all-time favorite happy-ending open-and-shut stories.
 
I like it when the MC tells me loud and clear that he is retarded in chapter 1 this way it would feel normal for him to do dumb shit
 
I must, I surprisingly liked it. It ended up being a nice story of character developement.

@OkiStash is kinda right. The guys love for swimsuits and swimsuit designing is kinda weird, but it is both more complicated than that and is something a reasonable reader can sympathise with.

Anyway, not bad, and probably worth a good read-through. @donutholer is right, though. I'm a little annoyed the ending was as short as it was. There should have been an epilogue or two. Would have certainly bumped my rating up a bit.
 

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