My Life as an Internet Novel - Ch. 7

What a horrible timeskip.
It make the earlier chapters totally useless, it's really, really bad.

I can't blame anyone for dropping it after this.
 
The timeskip to me is an interesting change of pace. Even though it was a bit too sudden as we just saw her introduction to this new world. And we are not even familiar with it yet.

But it might turn out to be good if the author did the time skip with intention to hide something from that 3 years from us.
 
Honestly I wouldn't blame the MC if she just broke down and screamed or ran away. Suddenly finding out you have a life you never knew about would be stressful af, not to mention how no one thinks treating middle schoolers like heavenly kings is strange. Have you met a middle schooler? They're dumb af, I would know I used to be one.
 
there's 4 heavenly kings on every school? man...i think you can make "school for extraordinarily rich kids" if you gether them lol
 
they really slammed that 3-year timeskip there casually lmao

even though i'm rereading it for the fourth time, it's still kind of odd to put that out there
 

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