This be more interesting. if the Dog became a human, and the dumb MC became a dog.
As it stands right now, its just some fetish piece of writing. Author imagining himself becoming a dog and getting cozy with a girl he had a crush on he could never approach.
Alright I understand the 7.5 stars, but man if the author can keep us intrigue and have a good ending, this would be a great read. The lewd parts are weirddddddd but it is what it is. Besides that, this ain't bad so far, hopefully it doesn't stagnate at just dogs licking them, but actually find out what happened.