My Lolita Brother - Ch. 20 - Returning Home...

Finally the ending. Thank you for finishing this series although the story itself is not good enough.
 
It’s amazing how you can take such a good concept and then, over the course of only 20 chapters, completely ruin it.
 
Yeesh, what a piece of crap. I know it was over the instant they downgraded a Lovecraftian abomination that grants wishes to a random black guy but this was just pitiful.
 
This, my friends, is how you take a great concept and write yourself completely into a corner with it. If you have some crazy idea of where to take your story maybe sleep on it before committing.

Thanks for picking up and finishing this scanlation, Kawaiifiveo.
 
The ending could have been better, but at least it got an ending, unlike Triangle Edge. 450 bucks for altering a lot of people's memories seems cheap.
 
Oh. Thanks for the chapter. Too bad the comic was terrible.

I don't mind that the force behind the app was just a brother hooked on a gacha game. If the rest of the comic was good (and the execution was better and not racist), it would be a pretty alright gag.
 

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