My Observational Diary of Elena Evoy - Ch. 14

@satomobileot5 personally, I think the color pallette looks nice because its smooth, shady/shiny (light reflection).

The purple made the shininess stand out more.
 
Elena doesn’t even know how beautiful she is. God truly is a woman. Thank you for the translation! ❤️
 
Damn I think I might be starting to simp for Elena. Also I do find the notes funny but I agree that they can detract from the mood. A solution I’ve seen other groups do is putting their notes/comments at the end of the chapter
 
A date in the sky. What a way to end the chapter.

To add my 2 cents, I think the TL notes are fine. I find them adding to the reading experience instead.
 
this chapter was almost p e r f e c t *-*
they're too cute, I'm definitely rooting for u Johann!
 
My heart is BEATING. Gosh, I'm just as thirsty as the TS commentary, love this commentary.
 
This chapter is so beautiful yet I felt so sad for Johann:(

And Johann's inner poet is killing me!! Such a melancholic boi i wuv
 

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