Negative Hero and Demon King's General - Vol. 1 Ch. 1

[MangaDex]

 

[WingManEXE]

Heya all, this is my first time doing typesetting and redraws, so any feedback is appreciated! I have translations for chapters 1-7, so I'll work on getting those up, but if someone can help me translate the most recent chapter, chapter 8, I'd appreciate it!

 

[EnkiduFSK]

@WingManEXE ths for your work, the next soon ?

 

[Jeremy9954]

Thanks very much, i always want this serie to be back!

 

[Wordsmith]

Of the three translations I've read, this is the best one.


No noticeable issues with grammar or spelling, everything reads well and makes complete sense, no awkward sentences or word choices.

I hope you guys continue this.

 

[Hollow7F]

uhh thks for doing this one

 

[Male]

Best translation skills most obvious with the last panel. No obvious issues with the typesetting and redraws.

 

[Reversinator]

Just out of curiosity, how are you guys judging which translation is the best? Are you comparing the text from the raw to the translations?

 

[GameMasterZX]

@Reversinator Yes, we were able to compare two different translations with the raw text, and we tried to come up with the best way of capturing the intent behind the original line we could while remaining coherent and engaging in English as well.

 

[SoLei]

aww...

 

[Duralumin]

better translation

 

[jwanito]

@WingManEXE thx for your work dude!

 

[Vein]

Thanks for this, I'm just happy this wasn't dropped complete since it looks interesting.

 

[aurafort]

i saw chapter 5-7 on some other site but no 1-4

 

[Dibella]

Oh fuck I shed a fucking tear

 

[Fenixr]

I read that as "CHOTTO MATTAAAAAAAA!!!" was fun for a sec or two.

 

[Grenzoocoon]

That was sad

 

[ColonelCrisp]

Crisp.

 

[Wolvenworks]

muh feels

 

[Velsy]

............ k?

wait!! the village murdered her parents ?