I hope Renya doesn't spare his words when he tells Shion's younger sister just what kind of a man the hero is and why Shion shouldn't have ever been sent to him.
out of the 3 curses the hero got, the smelling one is close to impossible to avoid.
the other two could be avoided if he was actively avoiding it, but you cant really avoid smelling people.
The only way would be to live in a house without women at all far from the rest of the population.
.... Can someone tell me how to make those poisons? I want to use them on someone.... and maybe in a dnd game to prevent the protags from fucking the entire tavern for the 56th time
That's a step forward from the last one in all aspects, hope you can make the dialogue a bit more fluid. Other than that, keep it up and don't hold chapters hostage.