@JackSen
pg. 13. I don't think you can split "someone" into "so-meone", actually, to begin with, I think "some" is just one syllable and you can't split it into "so-me".
I skim read and it stops me when my brain trying to guess what "meone" is, reading the word "so-meone" ... very meone?, then I had to read the entire sentence.
I would be very, VERY thankful if you decided to scanlate the prequel too, Nogizaka Haruka no Himitsu. I know mostly all of the story because of the anime, but the manga was very good and I'd love to see it fully translated, but it was dropped a long time ago. If you have any time left in your schedule at all, please consider it!