Onibito no Matsuri Daiichiwa - Zurui Meguriai - Oneshot

who knows if there is even a continuation for this, because this chapter translation is from around 2014 lol
 
Holy shit was this a fucking mess.
I can see why this didn't go anywhere
A long and laborious intro and then some fucking long narration right afterword
Those 35 pages felt more like a hundred



But, like, the arts nice I guess.
 
Sad this never went anywhere...although it’s pretty clear why.

For a dramatic Yuri story this could work if polished up and in both writing and plot.
 
What with these wall of text ? i don't remember i read novel here
 
I skipped most of the dialogues. It's just messy and full of nothingness. Like the yuri thing at least because of the fantastic art.
 
So uh... they axed this at one chapter?? How is that possible? I wanted to see more of the pair :/.
 

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