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... that first chapter is way more problematic than I remembered it. Protagonist not accepting a flatout 'no'. Then in the next scene physically stopping her from leaving (although he comes to his senses). And then the entire kerfuffle in public.
Oh, and the minor issue of using sleeping pills on somebody ...
Well. Let's just go with "it's just the setup for the story".
Oh, and the minor issue of using sleeping pills on somebody ...
Well. Let's just go with "it's just the setup for the story".