Oretachi no Party wa Machigatteiru

Too many useless monologue backstories (specially for the ninja bit) but pretty amusing story lol
 
The story is really lacking. The art isn't really that good and looks kind of amateurish. The characters aren't interesting and the only curse I find interesting is the dude that got turned into a chick and even then they don't do much. The story is also cliche. I kind of like the idea that the dude that turned into a chick turns into Yuri with the Princess. But the Knight dude is kind of obnoxious really.
 
1: Plot brilliant idea
2: Story execution, needs work
3: Art, ok also needs work

I'm enjoying it, only because it's a fresh look at classic tropes. I would love to see what this author can do once they get some experience in.
 
Last chapter (ch 12) felt like something an author would write when his series gets axed. Sad, since the premise seemed interesting enough, even if it ended up a weird mess.
 

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