Phoenix Against the World - Ch. 1

Me on the first day of gaurd duty. “Ay say man, is that a pterodactyl? Oh so y’all going to ignore me? I’m just saying, y’all don’t see this big ass, single bird in the middle of the ocean? Oh. Okay.
 
I guess IF anything I don't like about this so far.. Everyone looks like a damn kid. Even the people that are supposed to be adults.
 
I feel more sorry for the 12 year-old girl that died than this MC -- too bad the story wasn't about her.
 

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