If I was going to judge anything, it's that you've made a single low-detail drawing and used it as the only artwork for the cover and the entire first chapter.
Is this a meta-commentary on the tendencies of cookie-cutter isekais by literally copy/pasting the same image multiple times in the same introductory chapter, offering nothing new and even less substance?
>Don't judge me too harshly
>Entire project is just a single copy pasted illustration
>Shills Patreon at the end
I'd give you props for at least trying to make your own webcomic, but I don't even know if this would even qualify as that. It might as well be a shitpost.