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JACGohu Joined Jul 24, 2018 Messages 104 Apr 7, 2019 #2 Needs a good editor. Proofreading, sentence structure and grammar need polish. Granted it's not as bad as some others I've read, but there's still room for improvement.
Needs a good editor. Proofreading, sentence structure and grammar need polish. Granted it's not as bad as some others I've read, but there's still room for improvement.
