Pursuit: Blind Man Blues

[MangaDex]

 

[merukit]

The art is very messy and unrefined, making it confusing to actually establish what is happening. The characters are okay at best, and the pacing is off, though that may just be because I don't understand what's going on. The first few pages are just senseless exposition. It's not very good.

 

[Thegman234]

THanks for your thoughts Merukit i'm working on refining my style, i just thought I would show the authentic experience of publishing the manga when i was 16. I'm happy you gave me your thoughts i will improve!

 

[merukit]

keep on getting better, cheers

 

[Thegman234]

after the first chapter does it improve at all?

 

[Thegman234]

i'm working on getting better guys! whenever u guys have critiques let me know

 

[Hasya]

i like your art @Thegman234

 

[Thegman234]

Thank you @Hasya I'm doing my best