Queen

This could have been a whole series man but I still like it very much. As already pointed out it's a fairly rushed and over quick but nonetheless left a good impression.
 
The story was fine, but the way the story is told, with all the long empty spaces was boring. And why didn't he leave with her, what's with that ending? There was no reason for him to stay. Nothing he could lose..
 
Lots of "why didn't he leave with her?" Easy.

She didn't love him.

The Queen was doing what she had to do to survive. Not like she liked it, but had to do. I really enjoyed it!
 
Why does people say it is rushed? It's not, it's a stand alone chapter so there is really no point in dragging it any longer 🤔
Anyway, great OS, remember guys to support the author by "reading" it on Naver !!
 

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