Raid - Ch. 23 - Leader 2

Its really hard to be interested in this battle at all since its all because the MC held back when he was about to kill the team leader. There's absolutely no reason for any of this to be happening.

Its way too forced and I really wish it would just end already rather than give the girl a deus ex machina moment, because when done poorly, such as just now, it really shows off bad writing.
 

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